You think you’re okay
and then, every once in a while,
you stumble upon that beautiful verse,
that disarming canvas of art,
that balmy air up the mountain,
and it just stops your heart.
Because you remember
what it was like to be in love!
To be irrevocably intoxicated,
unabashedly euphoric,
and hopelessly undone.
You think you’re content
and then, every once in a while,
you come across that rusty old photograph,
that rose embalmed in the yellowed book,
that neighborhood which feels like a home you lost,
and the wind knocks out of your lungs.
Because you remember
what it was like to be consumed in love!
To be unreservedly defenseless,
fiercely unafraid,
and entirely powerless in their stance.
You think you’re enough
and then, every once in a while,
someone undresses your soul with their words,
rattles your consciousness with their eyes,
and gravity betrays your knees.
Because you remember
who you were when in love!
The fire in your belly,
the hankering in your bones,
now reminiscences of solitude.
So beautifully penned. Your words capture so well the remembrance of that special moment called love.
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Glad you liked it, thank you for reading! 🙂
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Pleasure. Best Regards.
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Absolutely beautiful. 💜
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Thank you for reading & sharing your thoughts! 🙂
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terrific poem: I’ve been through all these stages, so eloquently expressed; I can relate ; thank you 🙂
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Thank you for sharing, glad you could relate!☺️
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after all the pain, you’re stronger and more understanding of others; you;ve been to the depths and heights; you have true empathy 🙂
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Beautifully put!💙
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Stunningly eloquent.
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You’re too kind, thanks!
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This is great!
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Thanks a ton!
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Such stunning visuals you’ve captured with your words! This is beautiful!
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Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!
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You’re most welcome!
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You think you’re enough
and then, every once in a while,
someone undresses your soul with their words,
Wjhat a great set of lines!
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Glad you liked, thank you for sharing your thoughts! 🙂
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You are welcome!
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Such an intimate and organic expression of how love frees us from our minds and explodes open our hearts ❤️
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Thank you for reading & sharing your thoughts Ananda!💛
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Too good.
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Thank you Nishabd!
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Welcome. You can explore my blog.someday
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Stunning natural creativity Vishakha
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Thank you for reading! 💙
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You think you are never going to feel it again,
and then, every once in a while,
someone becomes a synonym of comfort to you.
I was reliving those experiences as I was going through the poem. Thank you.
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Glad you got to relive some of the good old memories 🙂
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A very beautiful poem!!
Kudos
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Thank you, Devang!
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Nice one.
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Thanks, Manoj!
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Well written and relevant to modern lifestyle,
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Nice poem and thanks for reminding something and someone. 👌
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Glad it took you down the memory lane, hope it was a good reminder! 🙂
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Amazing..
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When words becomes visuals, eloquently hypnotic. ❣️
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Thank you sharing your thoughts Raj! 🙂
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i wish you a happy new year
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A very happy new year to you as well!
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thank you very much
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The essence of a poem-beautifully written, emotional.
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Thanks Mary! 🤍
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Gosh, you are really good at this! 👏🏻
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